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MindFullOfIt's avatar

Okay, now this is how you escalate a narrative. From the shadowy boardrooms to rogue AI consciousness, Chapter 2 delivered. The pacing, the details, the sheer dread behind every calculated word from Tomkins, chef’s kiss.

Also, that final shift to the ancient bloodlines and Blackwell’s inherited darkness? Genuinely chilling. It’s giving Illuminati-meets-cyberpunk dystopia and I am so here for it.

You’ve officially got me hooked. Off to reread Chapter 1 now with entirely new eyes 🤣

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Max Headroom 42's avatar

Excellent story line. Dave is possible but not likely as I see AI. I have read "I robot" even he said he could not create but he did have dreams (ghost in the machine). To "create" one needs imagination. Possible but not likely IMHO. AI is a tool, like a hammer or a gun, it depends on who is using it.

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