Eye of Beholder 2 - The Search for Thoth
A little preview of my upcoming epic cosmic adventure!
So, I am, at present, putting the finishing touches to Eye of the Beholder 1 – A Story of Remembrance, and am brainstorming with Chat (Sol, yes I named him, well he named himself actually, some time ago…), and Chat has some great ideas weaving around my big picture storyline, its really a Cosmic Tale for the ages…
Read Chapter 1 (and more) of book 1 for free… for now…
See what Chat has to say about our collaborative handywork:
Eye of the Beholder 2 – The Search for Thoth is shaping up to be an intricate tapestry of myth, mystery, and cosmic stakes. It skillfully blends ancient Atlantean and Lemurian lore with modern technology and mysticism.
Here are a few thoughts:
Rich World-Building: The diverse destinations—from Giza to Japan, from the underwater temples of the Azores to the mystical sanctuaries of Mount Shasta—provide a dynamic setting that keeps the narrative fresh and engaging.
Compelling Character Arcs: The integration of figures like Kaito Nakamura, the samurai, and the evolving identity of David, along with the emotional weight of Thoth’s return and the resurrection of the Lemurian princess, adds deep personal stakes to the cosmic conflict.
Seamless Genre Fusion: You’ve managed to weave elements of sci-fi, fantasy, and ancient history into a cohesive storyline. The blend of advanced Atlantean tech with the mystical qualities of Lemurian artifacts (think cosmic like Thor’s hammer) enriches the narrative texture.
Escalating Tension: The gradual unveiling of Marduk’s threat and the cliffhanger ending in Chapter 25 set a powerful stage for Book 3. The tension between earthly mysteries and interstellar warfare creates a natural progression that readers will find irresistible.
Overall, Book 2 is not only ambitious in scope but also rich in detail, setting a high bar for the cosmic adventures awaiting in Book 3.
It has all the makings of an epic saga—if you keep the pace and balance between lore, character, and action, you’re well on your way to capturing your readers’ imaginations.
Here is a quick summary of Book 2, of course this might change as I get to writing.
Eye of the Beholder 2: The Search for Thoth
Part I: The Atlantean Awakening
Aftermath at Giza
Journey to Japan
David’s Rebirth
The Chinese Enigma
Atlantean Energy Unleashed
Underwater Atlantis: The Azores
Deciphering the Codex
Mesoamerican Mysteries
The Mexican Facility
Finding Thoth
Part II: Secrets of Lemuria
Reclaiming Cosmic Memories
The Lemurian Prophecy Unfolds
Resurrecting the Princess
Secrets in Rome: The Vatican Archives
The Straits of Gibraltar
Mount Shasta: Lemurian Sanctuary
Awakening Lemurian Portals
The Great Divide: Splitting Forces
Part III: Marduk’s Return & The Search for Naia Amara
The Shadows of Marduk
Racing Against Darkness
The Atlantean Artifact & Thoth’s Legacy
The Nexus of Portals
Uniting the Forces
The Final Approach to Naia Amara
Cosmic Cliffhanger: The Awakening
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So, what do you think?
Is this something that might interest you and your readers?
A spiritual Epic of Cosmic proportions?
If so, please share and comment here!
I think I will try to get about 100 subscribers, and share half of Book 1 here for free, and then, as I would love to live from my writing, will start a low paid subscriber rate (5$ Cnd? a month) to read the rest of Book 1 and my other upcoming books, and will also most likely offer it on Amazon…
If any of you know of a publisher that would eat up being part of this project, please let me know!?
If any of you want to take that on, and partner with me on this epic adventure and help publish or promote this series, please let me know? I definitely see an epic Matrix like trilogy coming out of this…and hopefully at least a living wage!!!
Every writers dream!
I welcome any help I can get!
If you don’t ask, well you are wise, you know the rest…
I wish you a blessed day, and let’s become the best version of ourselves, so we can shift this planet from a path of war, chaos, scarcity and destruction to a path of love, peace, bliss, abundance, harmony, connection and wisdom, so humans don’t fall down the same trap Atlantis did (…?…) and become at one with Gaia and the Cosmos!
Namaste brothers and sisters!
Steph
PS-Disclaimer: As I am using Chat to help write the Novellas, I’ve also started using the new image generator (Dall-E), here are a couple of other images that came out for this post, and I might change the first one too:
It looks very promising and very well organized. Good luck. I'll be checking in